Wednesday 14 November 2018
Friday 9 November 2018
Friday 2 November 2018
Friday 26 October 2018
Tuesday 18 September 2018
Friday 14 September 2018
Commenting
Today I commented on my friend's blog. I need to make sure that I'm giving them good feedback and saying what it was that I liked about their blog - korero whakamihi ki te tangata. Also, he kupu hei whakawhanui i te kaupapa, which means to suggest an improvement for their mahi.
Tuesday 11 September 2018
How bees make honey
WALT: Find out how bees make honey.
This is my reading response of how bees make honey. We had to highlight all the words that were nouns, verbs and adjectives. It was easy to find the nouns. Some of the descriptive verbs were hard to get, but I think I have done a good job.
This is my reading response of how bees make honey. We had to highlight all the words that were nouns, verbs and adjectives. It was easy to find the nouns. Some of the descriptive verbs were hard to get, but I think I have done a good job.
Wednesday 5 September 2018
My Blog Post Analysis
WALT: Analyse our blog posts.
Success Criteria: I will
Success Criteria: I will
- Create a graph to display my results.
This is my chart that I made using google sheets. It tells me that I have been posting more blog posts this year than last year. Already I can see that I have posted 11 blogs in August which is great to see I think.
Tuesday 4 September 2018
Commenting
WALT: Make a positive comment on a peers blog.
Today I commented on Rangi's blog. Firstly, I have realised that I need to get my work buddy checked before I post as it doesn't make sense. I have not started the sentence with a capital letter and all my little 'i' need to be made into a capital 'I'. Secondly, I forgot to say what it was that I liked about her mahi. I need to elaborate more. Also, I needed to suggest a way that she could improve her learning. I could have asked her a question. I will remember next time.
Friday 31 August 2018
Thursday 30 August 2018
Friday 24 August 2018
Thursday 23 August 2018
Electricity
Success Criteria: I will
Explain my thinking.
Create a diagram to support my thinking.
When making an electrical circuit you need a battery, copper wire, a light bulb and a switch to turn it on and off. If the circuit is closed, the light bulb will glow. If the circuit is open, the light bulb will turn off. This is because the energy given by the battery is prevented from making a complete circuit, so the electrons will have no where to go.
Below is a picture of my circuit.
Tuesday 21 August 2018
Monday 20 August 2018
My Hook
WALT: Write an amazing hook that will capture my audiences interest.
SC: I will have
SC: I will have
- An interesting hook - ask a question, figurative langauge.
- 3-4 sentences or a paragraph.
- Vivid verbs.
I rolled out of bed, eager to start my day. I put my clothes on. I brushed my teeth. I had a wash and breakfast. I was excited! I raced to the lounge, because I could hear people talking. Who was that? Great Grandma!
Friday 17 August 2018
wheel words
WALT: Learning to spell the correct words to win the game the ones that are white are the ones that I got done.
Today I played a spelling game.
Time Trail
Thursday 9 August 2018
Creativity
Labels:
inqury
Location:
3732 MO-13, Dunnegan, MO 65640, USA
Friday 27 July 2018
My Holidays
WALT: Write a recount of one specific moment during my school holidays.
SUCCESS CRITERIA: I will have
- A title
- A orientation - Who, what, when, where, how, why
- Fantastic language - time words, past tense, vivid verbs/vocabulary
- Proofread/buddy checked my draft - punctuation, spelling and grammar.
- A conclusion to wrap everything up.
- A plan of the key points I will talk about.
My Plan: (10 mins)
In my holidays
Last Friday we had a disco at my house their were games lost of my friends came and cousins came to the disco we had a disco light and we had the tool lunch to four o clock, p:m the people Loucie,Shony,Leah,Me,my nan,Sister Tracey,Arkillies,Aalayis and Alezmah,Roxie and next friday we whent to the beach and my cosins came Loucie,Shony,Leah,Me,my nan,Sister Tracey,Arkillies,Aalayis and Alezmah.
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My Holidays
Last Friday we had a disco at my house their were games lost of my friends came and cousins came to the disco we had a disco light and we had the tool lunch to 4:00, p:m the people Loucie, Shony, Leah, Me, my nan, Sister Tracey, Arkillies, Aalayis and Alezmah, Roxie and next Friday we went to the beach and my counis came Loucie, Shony, Leah ,Me, ( gran mama Leeane , Sister Tracey, Arkillies, Aalayis and Alezmah we all went to Ngawha Springs we went in baby and my cosin was telling a dum story about a mans leg in the pool I didn’t believe him, because he’s a liar. After a few hours we got out then we went home and had a good sleep and got ready for school. THE END
Wednesday 27 June 2018
man ran away
WALT:make short movements for each shot.
what i learnt was that never put your hand when you take a shot
whet worked that it was easy to make it look real.
i found out it wast difficult because my hands keep getting in my way.
what i learnt was that never put your hand when you take a shot
whet worked that it was easy to make it look real.
i found out it wast difficult because my hands keep getting in my way.
Friday 15 June 2018
My Speech Critique
Today my class had to present their speeches. I talked about how bulling should be banned.
I made sure that I did't make mistakes, but I was so busy focusing on reading my words that I forgot to look at my class and make eye contact.
The challenging part was when I had to speak in front of my class. I get so nervous because I feel embarrassed. Anyway, even more embarrassing is having to post my speech video to my blog for you all to watch.
So, here it is.
Wednesday 13 June 2018
coding
Hour of Code or Learning to Code OR your own idea
We have been learning to code.
I enjoyed …coding..
It was challenging when …i got suck..
I helped others by …minecraft…….
I needed help with ……wai……..
It took me ………for ever …………….. to finish the 12 stages. When I finished the 12 stages I got a certificate. I took screenshots as I worked my way through the stages. When you look at the screenshots you can see how I used blocks to create the code which made ………………………………….
Remember when you copy and paste your writing to go on the blog. As you paste on blog, you need to hold SHIFT down before you Ctrl V. Otherwise your writing will go over the side of your blog.
Friday 11 May 2018
Wednesday 4 April 2018
Wednesday 28 March 2018
te reo
ki-o-rahi
At ki-o-rahi we versed other school's and i was in toutoro 2 and i was the only girl in the van and after ki-o-rahi we had a white choc top from mac donles it was yum this my writing of ki-o-rahi
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