Friday, 14 September 2018


Today I commented on my friend's blog. I need to make sure that I'm giving them good feedback and saying what it was that I liked about their blog - korero whakamihi ki te tangata. Also, he kupu hei whakawhanui i te kaupapa, which means to suggest an improvement for their mahi.

Tuesday, 11 September 2018

How bees make honey

WALT: Find out how bees make honey.

This is my reading response of how bees make honey.  We had to highlight all the words that were nouns, verbs and adjectives.  It was easy to find the nouns.  Some of the descriptive verbs were hard to get, but I think I have done a good job. 

Wednesday, 5 September 2018

12 wakahoe

WALT:learn all our wakahoe

My Blog Post Analysis

WALT: Analyse our blog posts.
Success Criteria:  I will
  • Create a graph to display my results.

This is my chart that I made using google sheets. It tells me that I have been posting more blog posts this year than last year. Already I can see that I have posted 11 blogs in August which is great to see I think.

Tuesday, 4 September 2018


WALT: Make a positive comment on a peers blog.

Today I commented on Rangi's blog.  Firstly, I have realised that I need to get my work buddy checked before I post as it doesn't make sense.  I have not started the sentence with a capital letter and all my little 'i' need to be made into a capital 'I'.  Secondly, I forgot to say what it was that I liked about her mahi.  I need to elaborate more.  Also, I needed to suggest a way that she could improve her learning.  I could have asked her a question.  I will remember next time.


WALT:Keep a written journal of our thoughts and feelings.

Reading Response