Today I commented on my friend's blog. I need to make sure that I'm giving them good feedback and saying what it was that I liked about their blog - korero whakamihi ki te tangata. Also, he kupu hei whakawhanui i te kaupapa, which means to suggest an improvement for their mahi.
Hi Ellawisha, Its me Kohl-lee. What I think about you comment is that you did good, but you have to check with a teacher before you post. So remember always a capital letter at the start, and if its a name you also have a capital letter. Also check you punctuation,Spelling and full stops. Well other than that you did a good job. Blog you Later.:)
WALT: draw 3D objects Today we drew a picture of room 5&6 but it was mostly of room 6 this time. This is my 3rd attempted it was bette...
Hi Ellawisha, Its me Kohl-lee. What I think about you comment is that you did good, but you have to check with a teacher before you post. So remember always a capital letter at the start, and if its a name you also have a capital letter. Also check you punctuation,Spelling and
ReplyDeletefull stops. Well other than that you did a good job. Blog you Later.:)