Friday 23 August 2019

Thursday 22 August 2019

Why we need a hall

WALT: use a rubric to mark a piece of writing.
sc: I will use the rubric to mark then write why I gave it that point I will add total of points and gave it a level.   

In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrolments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed. 

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.

Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.


                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark

Ideas
5
I think that there are lots of ideas that connect to the topic
Structure Language
5
I think that  all of the structure is in the right place with extra information
Organisation
5
I think that all the paragraphs are in the right place 
Vocabulary
4
I think they used a range of words to add detail and to make people want to read their writing 
Sentence Structure
5
I think that they can write a variety of sentences with some difficult words spelt correctly
Punctuation 
5
I think that they use the correct punctuation
Spelling
5
I think that they had spelt all the words correctly
Total
34
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Friday 16 August 2019

chair making

S What is the science behind this challenge? To make a paper chair and to put enough tape to make the  paper strong and make sure the teddy can fit onto the chair     

T  Research this topic using books or and the internet record any information you may find.

Start with a six inch square piece of paper. ...Fold the right and left side so they meet at the middle crease, and crease them well.The paper should be divided into four equal parts. ...Fold the paper the other way, and crease well.
Fold the top right corner to meet the first vertical line and crease well.
instructions


 E What was your design solution for this challenge?

M  What data can you record for this challenge?  


Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge                    
My Questions?




Were you successful in the challenge? Why? No because i was not paying attention 

What was the most difficult part of the challenge? The most difficult part of the challenge was listening and following instructions 

What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge? I came up with no idea 

Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not?  What type of chair design did you use? Why? A couch        
What did you learn about construction and engineering during this challenge? nothing






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