writing

Ella

Wednesday 26/2/2020

The power of friends

Intro: 

Do you have a friend??

We all need friends because they will help us. A true friend will not let you down they will help you succeed and they will always be there for you but you need a true friend not a friend online a real friend because if you have an online friend then they might get you into trouble.

Body:

Do you need a good  friend?? 

Firstly everyone needs a good friend to guide them before they do something wrong. A good and real friend won’t let you do the wrong things. They are like a brother or sister, we can succeed when we have our friends around  we can help them to and when we are older they will have our back and we will have their back too. We need friends that are 

True,loyal,helpful,trustworthy and honest. We need to follow those words to not just our friends, but how we can follow those words we need to be nice to our friend,even if you have an enemy you can overcome it and be nice to your enemy then you will become friends or maybe best friends

     Is there a chance of making good friends??

Secondly there is always a chance of making good friends but it’s hard to make the bestest friends because you need to earn their trust and they need to earn yours a good could be there but you don’t notice that they are there until you ask them to be friends with you. That will be way better having a good friend but online friends are not good if it’s someone you know online like your friends from school or cousins and auntys an uncles  then be friends with them not others that you don’t know never talk to strangers.

What is the usage of friends? 

Thirdly the usage of friends is that they are helpful and respectful. They will keep all your secrets and thoughts like a storage room with lots of  folders. After all, why are friends useful?? They can help with all your problems and trials they can help you lead your path towards goodness.

Conclusion 

A good friend is a powerful tool that can keep you safe and secure friends and everyone needs a good friend to guide them and look after them. We all need friends because they will help us.         

        

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