SC: I will have
- An interesting hook - ask a question, figurative langauge.
- 3-4 sentences or a paragraph.
- Vivid verbs.
I rolled out of bed, eager to start my day. I put my clothes on. I brushed my teeth. I had a wash and breakfast. I was excited! I raced to the lounge, because I could hear people talking. Who was that? Great Grandma!
Kia ora Ellawisha,
ReplyDeleteGreat Grandma! That does sound exciting... I am wondering what exciting things are going to happen next with Great Grandma. Well done hooking me into your story. I liked your start - I rolled out of bed, eager to start my day. Great words. Keep up the great work sharing. I love reading and seeing your learning on your blog.
Ngā mihi nui
Tania