Tuesday, 4 September 2018

Commenting


WALT: Make a positive comment on a peers blog.

Today I commented on Rangi's blog.  Firstly, I have realised that I need to get my work buddy checked before I post as it doesn't make sense.  I have not started the sentence with a capital letter and all my little 'i' need to be made into a capital 'I'.  Secondly, I forgot to say what it was that I liked about her mahi.  I need to elaborate more.  Also, I needed to suggest a way that she could improve her learning.  I could have asked her a question.  I will remember next time.

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